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Dangling Modifiers - Exercise 5

For help with any item below, refer to this part of the Misplaced Modifiers page.

1. After explaining that I had lost my wallet, the waiter allowed me to pay by check.

Correct: After I explained that I had lost my wallet, the waiter allowed me to pay by check.

Your Answer:

2. Driving up the long, tree lined driveway, the mansion loomed above us.

Correct: As we drove up the long, tree lined driveway, the mansion loomed above us.

Your Answer:

3. Once filled with ink, you can write for hours before the pen runs dry.

Correct: Once the pen is filled with ink, you can write for hours before the pen runs dry.

Your Answer:

4. Having done the dishes and vacuumed the floors, my house looked decent again.

Correct: After I washed the dishes and vacuumed the floors, my house looked decent again.

Your Answer:

5. Playing football for the first time, the game was too strenuous for Maxwell.

Correct: When Maxwell played football for the first time, the game was too strenuous for him.

Your Answer:

6. Standing on the runway, a plane will hit you.

Correct: If you stand on the runway, a plane will hit you.

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7. Reading Newsweek, an article on the dangers of ice fishing caught my eye.

Correct: As I was reading Newsweek, an article on the dangers of ice fishing caught my eye.

Your Answer:

8. When just two years old, my mother showed me how to dance the polka.

Correct: When I was just two years old, my mother showed me how to dance the polka.

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9. While visiting the reptile house, the crocodile frightened my friends.

Correct: While my friends were visiting the reptile house, the crocodile frightened them.

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10. After showing my ID badge to the guard, the gate opened.

Correct: After I showed my ID badge to the guard, the gate opened.

Your Answer:

If you made no errors on this exercise, go on to the Post Test.
If you got three or fewer wrong and do not understand your error, go back to this section and reread the material, trying to see why your answer is incorrect. If you still don't understand, ask the Writing Support Program office for help.
If you got more than three wrong, STOP working and ask the Writing Support Program officefor help. Then go on to Post Test

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benner@towson.edu

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